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Monday, November 1, 2010




The morning dew drops
Leave little beads of crystal
Fancy as they dance
The sun, their demon

Wysteria
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11 comments:

  1. eyeographyNovember 1, 2010 at 1:46 PM

    like like.. :)
    dew drops as little beads of crystal...
    and the sun, their demon..
    Lovely.. :)

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  2. AnonymousNovember 1, 2010 at 5:22 PM

    I love the imagery...sun-demon...brilliant.

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  3. WysteriaNovember 2, 2010 at 2:58 PM

    Sumit,

    Thank you for stopping by! I am glad you liked the poem

    Wysteria

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  4. WysteriaNovember 2, 2010 at 2:58 PM

    David!

    Thanks again... I am so happy to hear someone likes what I write. You are so supportive!

    Wysteria

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  5. JingleNovember 2, 2010 at 7:26 PM

    your words paint a vivid image here,
    love it.
    xx

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  6. WysteriaNovember 2, 2010 at 8:00 PM

    Thank you Jingle!!!!!!!!!!

    Wysteria

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  7. The Write GirlNovember 2, 2010 at 9:19 PM

    Clever take on the poem...I love the last line. Nicely written!

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  8. PattiNovember 3, 2010 at 10:46 AM

    Loved this- and I like the idea of the sun as a demon

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  9. Lisa at GreenbowNovember 4, 2010 at 7:44 AM

    Ah yes, it is that time of year. It just shows that we all have demons.

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  10. Ramesh SoodNovember 4, 2010 at 8:22 AM

    Very beautifully put.. a dew drop.. lives with hope for a longer life.. but Sun? Reality..well put.. loved it..

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  11. gabrielleNovember 5, 2010 at 8:56 PM

    Oh that demon sun!

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