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Monday, November 1, 2010




The morning dew drops
Leave little beads of crystal
Fancy as they dance
The sun, their demon

Wysteria

11 comments:

  1. like like.. :)
    dew drops as little beads of crystal...
    and the sun, their demon..
    Lovely.. :)

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  2. I love the imagery...sun-demon...brilliant.

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  3. Sumit,

    Thank you for stopping by! I am glad you liked the poem

    Wysteria

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  4. David!

    Thanks again... I am so happy to hear someone likes what I write. You are so supportive!

    Wysteria

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  5. your words paint a vivid image here,
    love it.
    xx

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  6. Thank you Jingle!!!!!!!!!!

    Wysteria

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  7. Clever take on the poem...I love the last line. Nicely written!

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  8. Loved this- and I like the idea of the sun as a demon

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  9. Ah yes, it is that time of year. It just shows that we all have demons.

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  10. Very beautifully put.. a dew drop.. lives with hope for a longer life.. but Sun? Reality..well put.. loved it..

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