We are in Mystical Times, at least I am......
Four lines that speak volumes through breathing feelings of loss and togetherness. Uplifting ending, literally and emotionally. Cheers, Wysteria
Beautiful...love the sense of breathing..spirit...blessings...bkm
I could feel the sway of breathing in your piece.
so much said in four lines...truly brilliant my friend
i love the inhaling and exhaling in your poem - it breathes with life..
That's bound to be a remarkable ride.
Really nice expression of sentiment in so few words... well done!
I agree with all the rest and their comments, what can I add? It was mystical and lovely.
The soul leaving the vale (of tearsa nd darkness) behind. Good one.
Thank you all for stopping by and leaving such beautiful comments.I wish I could explain the feeling I had just before I saw this picture posted. Incredible...photoWysteria
Mystical...and very touching...I love it :)
A peaceful ending, with touches of the spiritual - just close your eyes and breathe, peace settles in the aftermath. Wonderful!