Wishful
Exhaling, you leave me
Your presence only felt
Inhaling, your spirit enters
Lifting me to heaven, with you
Wysteria
We are in Mystical Times, at least I am...... Wysteria --- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VQWwZQxSwoM
We are in Mystical Times, at least I am...... Wysteria --- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VQWwZQxSwoM
Four lines that speak volumes through breathing feelings of loss and togetherness. Uplifting ending, literally and emotionally. Cheers, Wysteria
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...love the sense of breathing..spirit...blessings...bkm
ReplyDeleteI could feel the sway of breathing in your piece.
ReplyDeleteso much said in four lines...truly brilliant my friend
ReplyDeletei love the inhaling and exhaling in your poem - it breathes with life..
ReplyDeleteThat's bound to be a remarkable ride.
ReplyDeleteReally nice expression of sentiment in so few words... well done!
ReplyDeleteI agree with all the rest and their comments, what can I add? It was mystical and lovely.
ReplyDeleteThe soul leaving the vale (of tearsa nd darkness) behind. Good one.
ReplyDeleteThank you all for stopping by and leaving such beautiful comments.
ReplyDeleteI wish I could explain the feeling I had just before I saw this picture posted. Incredible...photo
Wysteria
Mystical...and very touching...
ReplyDeleteI love it :)
A peaceful ending, with touches of the spiritual - just close your eyes and breathe, peace settles in the aftermath. Wonderful!
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