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Sunday, December 19, 2010

Arrow Shot One Shoot Sunday



Wishful


Exhaling, you leave me
Your presence only felt
Inhaling, your spirit enters
Lifting me to heaven, with you

Wysteria

12 comments:

  1. Four lines that speak volumes through breathing feelings of loss and togetherness. Uplifting ending, literally and emotionally. Cheers, Wysteria

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  2. Beautiful...love the sense of breathing..spirit...blessings...bkm

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  3. I could feel the sway of breathing in your piece.

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  4. so much said in four lines...truly brilliant my friend

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  5. i love the inhaling and exhaling in your poem - it breathes with life..

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  6. That's bound to be a remarkable ride.

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  7. Really nice expression of sentiment in so few words... well done!

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  8. I agree with all the rest and their comments, what can I add? It was mystical and lovely.

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  9. The soul leaving the vale (of tearsa nd darkness) behind. Good one.

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  10. Thank you all for stopping by and leaving such beautiful comments.

    I wish I could explain the feeling I had just before I saw this picture posted. Incredible...photo

    Wysteria

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  11. Mystical...and very touching...
    I love it :)

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  12. A peaceful ending, with touches of the spiritual - just close your eyes and breathe, peace settles in the aftermath. Wonderful!

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