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Friday, October 22, 2010

At First Glance

Three words -Effect, immense, shimmer --http://www.threewordwednesday.com/


At First Glance
He
 didn't know

The  effect on me

Sitting , I fidgeted

Twirling a silky strand of walnut colored hair

around and around, two of my fingers.

An immense wave of warm blush crept along my cheeks

I could feel my body reacting, feverishly trying to hide it

Then, his eyes lifted to mine, shimmering, endless pools of ebony

Surprisingly, I held them with my own depths of blue

Breathlessly, wanting to shake my head and lose his gaze

The strands of hair only tightening around my fingers, 
It felt as if I would cut off the circulation

Death by twirling hair!

And then, he looked away

Not interested, the shimmer gone from his eyes
For me, I looked to the door for another to enter,

Hoping to find that  feeling again, I smoothed my hair back into place

What subtle signs we give when the effect of another's eyes meet ours
A hopeful first glance, that ends with a blink of an eye

Wysteria

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9 comments:

  1. Ooo... I know this feeling. It doesn't come often enough and always leaves me wishing I had a poker face. This rocks!

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  2. This is a great read, full of smoky emotion.

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  3. Easy come, easy go! :) "Death by twirling hair" - ha!

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  4. What a beautiful job describing a beautiful feeling...luv it;)

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  5. good luck in finding that feeling again.
    beautiful spirits.

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  6. Wow! Loved the story and how you tied it together with the twirling hair!

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    poets rally participation awards.
    enjoy!

    let me know after you are done 18 poets visiting…
    thanks a lot.
    u rock!
    xx

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  8. Thank you everyone for stopping by and leaving such kind words.

    Jingle I am done with my 18!!!!!!!!!!

    Wysteria

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  9. Very well written! You are talented :)

    Hop here from 3WW and follow you
    Happy Wednesday

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