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At First Glance
He didn't know
The effect on me
Sitting , I fidgeted
Twirling a silky strand of walnut colored hair
around and around, two of my fingers.
An immense wave of warm blush crept along my cheeks
I could feel my body reacting, feverishly trying to hide it
Then, his eyes lifted to mine, shimmering, endless pools of ebony
Surprisingly, I held them with my own depths of blue
Breathlessly, wanting to shake my head and lose his gaze
The strands of hair only tightening around my fingers,
It felt as if I would cut off the circulation
Death by twirling hair!
And then, he looked away
Not interested, the shimmer gone from his eyes
For me, I looked to the door for another to enter,
Hoping to find that feeling again, I smoothed my hair back into place
What subtle signs we give when the effect of another's eyes meet ours
A hopeful first glance, that ends with a blink of an eye
Wysteria
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Ooo... I know this feeling. It doesn't come often enough and always leaves me wishing I had a poker face. This rocks!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great read, full of smoky emotion.
ReplyDeleteEasy come, easy go! :) "Death by twirling hair" - ha!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful job describing a beautiful feeling...luv it;)
ReplyDeletegood luck in finding that feeling again.
ReplyDeletebeautiful spirits.
Wow! Loved the story and how you tied it together with the twirling hair!
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enjoy!
let me know after you are done 18 poets visiting…
thanks a lot.
u rock!
xx
Thank you everyone for stopping by and leaving such kind words.
ReplyDeleteJingle I am done with my 18!!!!!!!!!!
Wysteria
Very well written! You are talented :)
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